Blue Mass. Group

[cos]

My first post on Blue Mass. Group is up!
It's my favorite blog covering Massachusetts politics, and I'm happy to join them - even though it took more than a month from when they gave me a posting account, until I managed to actually write something. Anyway, I wrote about the candidates forum in Somerville last week, with the four senate candidates. Here's my post:

Impressions from the Candidates Forum

Pass it on, link to it, send me some traffic. Comments on how to make my writing better are welcome (here on LJ :). As abilouise reminded me at the end of the forum, if only Jake had been there! I'd love to have seen his writeup.
(yes, the troll is always ornery like that, we've learned to tolerate him and he does bring in a useful perspective sometimes)

Comments

[dpolicar]

Actually, I thought it was pretty well-written. It could stand some tightening of the "eliminate every third word" variety, but it's clear and cogent.